跟小貝殼學英譯 送元二使安西

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送元二使安西(唐)王維

渭城朝雨浥輕塵,
客舍青青柳色新。
勸君更盡一杯酒,
西出陽關無故人。

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Seeing Yuan the second off to Anxi as an envoy

By Wei Wang

(Translated by Yimusanfendi)

The morning rain in Weicheng moistened the light dusts,
Willows by the guest house are having new green colors.
I am urging you to take one more cup of rice wine,
Going west out of the Sunny Pass you'll find no old friends.

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Translated by 小貝殼
(August 17, 2016)

The morning drizzle has wet Weicheng's dusty ground,
making the green inn and willows look fresh and sound.  
Oh, dear friend, please take another cup of farewell,  as   
going westbound,  no more old friends  after Yang Pass.

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A Quatrain By Wang Wei

(Translated by Xiao Cao)
(Seeing Yuan Er as Envoy off to Anxi)

The dawn drizzle clears the dust o’er Wei town;
The inn the green looks the fresh willows lend.
Pray you must one more cup of wine gulp down;
Yon th’ west of Yang Pass there isn’t an old friend.
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讚好譯! -elzevir- 給 elzevir 發送悄悄話 elzevir 的博客首頁 (113 bytes) () 08/23/2016 postreply 13:44:47

謝謝E妹! 是liquor... 我覺得酒精不高, 與wine 差不多。~~~ -Yimusanfendi- 給 Yimusanfendi 發送悄悄話 Yimusanfendi 的博客首頁 (82 bytes) () 08/23/2016 postreply 18:00:33

學習 欣賞 -葉虻- 給 葉虻 發送悄悄話 葉虻 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/23/2016 postreply 16:22:09

謝謝葉兄鼓勵 -Yimusanfendi- 給 Yimusanfendi 發送悄悄話 Yimusanfendi 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/23/2016 postreply 18:08:41

讚!謝謝一畝詩人,深感榮幸:) 那時的酒可能是spirit?白酒? -小貝殼weed- 給 小貝殼weed 發送悄悄話 小貝殼weed 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/23/2016 postreply 19:53:36

應該是低度米酒.... 與現在的白酒還是不同。rice wine 更準確少些 -Yimusanfendi- 給 Yimusanfendi 發送悄悄話 Yimusanfendi 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/23/2016 postreply 21:33:36

小建議,dust用單數。 -竹杖- 給 竹杖 發送悄悄話 竹杖 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/24/2016 postreply 16:05:40

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