You left me – Sire – two Legacies –（試譯，與顫音詩友共勉）

You left me – Sire – two Legacies – (713) 

BY EMILY DICKINSON

 

You left me – Sire – two Legacies –

A Legacy of Love

A Heavenly Father would suffice

Had He the offer of –

 

You left me Boundaries of Pain –

Capacious as the Sea –

Between Eternity and Time –

Your Consciousness – and me –

 

你遺留給我，閣下，兩筆財富--

一筆是愛的財富

倘若天父得此

他必定一樣滿足

 

你留給我痛苦的邊際--

好像海洋一般寬闊--

在永恒與瞬時之間--

你的知覺--和我--

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• 欣賞一畝兄好譯，祝新春快樂！ -寒硯- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/05/2016 postreply 06:56:35

• 好詩好譯，拜讀得益~~~一兄過年好！ -龐士清- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/05/2016 postreply 13:42:22

• 欣賞好譯。久不見，問好~ -Eragon- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/06/2016 postreply 07:58:06

• ?兄久不見甚念。祝春節快樂，萬事如意！ -Yimusanfendi- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/06/2016 postreply 08:22:58