Excellent work, see inside

來源: 逢緣隨意 於 2014-11-07 06:50:53 [] [博客] [舊帖] [給我悄悄話] 閱讀數 : (327 bytes)
1. with my heart setting aside;
2. here "roars" should be "roar";
3. "blows" should be "blowing";
4. rather say "Once upon a time the moonlight was bright;
5. something being denied;
6. being so untied.
個見, 不見得一定正確。不要介意喔。

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