這種自由體詩很有普及作用但沒有太高的藝術價值，試譯兩段如下

somewhere i have never travelled,gladly beyond

有個地方我從沒去過，很高興任何人都經驗

any experience,your eyes have their silence:

不到，你的眼哞裏有其沉默：

in your most frail gesture are things which enclose me,

你最纖巧的姿勢中有東西把我包圍，

or which i cannot touch because they are too near

我觸摸不到因為它們靠得太近

 

your slightest look easily will unclose me

你最不在乎的一瞥也會為我解圍，

though i have closed myself as fingers,

盡管我已把自我捏在手心，

you open always petal by petal myself as Spring  opens

你總是會像春天（用巧妙神秘的觸摸）摸開

(touching skilfully,mysteriously)her first rose
第一朵玫瑰一樣一瓣一瓣地打開我的自我

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