感覺這首似是寫實的詩,思緒有些散亂,詩體前後變化不自然.
所有跟帖:
• 行家的眼力,厲害!大娘一定文筆了得,一會去拜訪你的博客,謝了! -元梁- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/07/2010 postreply 08:15:22
• 行家的眼力,厲害!大娘一定文筆了得,一會去拜訪你的博客,謝了! -元梁- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/07/2010 postreply 08:15:22
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