There is no doubt that your English is much better than mine. I am 1L, law school is not fun, especially when everybody is waiting impatiently for the first term grade.
Actually I quite enjoy the reading most of time in my first term, but, you know, some time when I stay late in library, I can't help feel a little bit lost, I feel I miss a lot of other things in life. I am a moody person, and a little bit greedy, I want to have all.
But anyway, thank you very for your suggestion. I will work on my writing.