Bad Writing

來源: 檸檬椰子汁 2015-01-18 11:38:21 [] [舊帖] [給我悄悄話] 本文已被閱讀: 次 (656 bytes)
回答: 請教加州關於dash cam使用的規定十年之前2015-01-18 11:32:21
The manual should have said:

"A crash or "unusual motion” of the vehicle can automatically trigger the camera’s recording function, [t]he recorder may not store more than 30 seconds of data before and after the event that triggers its recording function. [B]ut the driver can also manually operate it for the purpose of monitoring his driving performance. "

Even with this revision, "the event" was not defined earlier, we can only guess event = crash/unusual motion because they share the word "trigger".

I hate bad writing. This text is written by an engineer, not an English major.

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原文說法有語病,改寫後依然存在。 -十年之前- 給 十年之前 發送悄悄話 (411 bytes) () 01/18/2015 postreply 11:58:59

語言要精確 -檸檬椰子汁- 給 檸檬椰子汁 發送悄悄話 (411 bytes) () 01/18/2015 postreply 13:29:39

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