Many a me 在英文詩歌網站上首頁 顯擺一把

好玩的是這個網站是個電腦高手弄的，他弄了個給詩歌打分的，按照分數置頂，不過他也“優化”他的打分係統。最新版給的分數和老板幾乎180度轉彎。這個是近一年前寫的，那時分數很低的，新版來了，竟然置頂了。哈哈哈。

 

Many a Me

Many a Me
drowned in your eyes
roll down your face
and fall onto my palms
cold and warm
Seep through my fingers
drop by drop
vanish into the soil
© Oct '22

Likes: kevin, MissHexxx, kaye, Autumnhope2, Shidare, Ken Doll, Apollo Silvercrest, Frélancér, Denis Blazevic, Soulstice1, Jackybee, Beyonder, Cam., Busy, AbelBPoetry, Roha

 

Shidare - It sounds like the beautiful song of a teardrop.... Singing of the melancholic life of its own kind. The rythym... very soothing and easy. Beautiful precious one
6 hours ago

Busy - Fantastic poem. I can relate to it well. Keep going
8 hours ago

Busy - Interpretation first put forward by the profound german philosopher professor martin Heidegger. Or was it Nietzsche before him. I dunno! Lol
7 hours ago

Busy - But lol this is but my interpretation of the poem. Sorry if it is miles out.
7 hours ago

Busy - We all get sanded down and vanished like pieces of wood lol in Zen I think they call it the lacquer barrel but I am not sure. But I had a friend a few years ago telling me about it. You never know it may be a universal! But as a particular it related to me anyway. Great poem.
7 hours ago

 

 

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• 謝謝分享。覺得自己的英文不行，但知道有線上翻譯可以用，於是就試了3個，譯文在內。 -Shubin- ♂ (4660 bytes) () 08/09/2023 postreply 08:53:09

• 謝謝，1+3都不離譜啊 -顫音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/09/2023 postreply 14:19:30

• 把me 換成 potato是不是也通：） -核桃小丸子- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/09/2023 postreply 08:55:24

• 核桃兄你這腦洞開得夠大。英文咱不行，但這仨軟件是接受potato和walnut ball的，隻不過各有各的味道。 -Shubin- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/09/2023 postreply 09:03:59

• 我就是淘氣，想著把一個土豆把玩也挺有趣 -核桃小丸子- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/09/2023 postreply 09:19:12

• 就知道你在設套使壞兒… :)) -土豆-禾苗- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/09/2023 postreply 09:44:56

• 好，迷你透明 -顫音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/09/2023 postreply 14:19:07

• 本山這個是好，語言的魅力一下就顯出來了，就是用最簡單的詞造出最神奇的景和情，說Fantastic一點都不錯啊 -donau- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/09/2023 postreply 23:19:54

• 謝謝多瑙 -顫音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 08/10/2023 postreply 08:19:53