2年前的兩個人的咖啡時間

Rain drops in our coffee

We bid farewell on a rainy day,
at Cafe de la Rotonde we frequent.
Underneath one umbrella we gaze at the ashtray
through its shiny surface we see bent and dent.
A moment we are flooded with words to say,
but our tongues fail us motionless and silent.
Upon a gust rain goes sideway,
into our cold coffee it descends.
So we finish our coffee in the rain,
that tastes like warm, bitter, and salty grains.

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Jenny Middleton - I love the visual images you create in this poem. Thanks for sharing it.2 years ago  

Ali Tajmir-Riahi - Keep writing inspiring2 years ago   

Debosmita Saha - With your words and emotions you took me to "Cafe de la Rotonde" and made my heart feel the sweet setting . This poem is so well written . Keep penning !2 years ago   

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• 中文中文中文~~~勉強點個讚吧~~~雨中喝咖啡，你行啊~~~ -雪晶- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/03/2022 postreply 17:38:13

• 雪班，我送你中文，哈哈 -kirn- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/03/2022 postreply 18:22:28

• 謝謝謝謝，看到，太棒了啊~~~ -雪晶- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/03/2022 postreply 18:35:31

• 謝謝勉強的讚 -顫音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/03/2022 postreply 20:54:10

• 俺和你--風雨作別 咖啡勤宴 人在傘簷 目落灰濺 流光顏麵 或盈或缺 彼時多言 亦動亦滅 冷雨斜煙 入飲若雪 與君向別 -kirn- ♀ (93 bytes) () 05/03/2022 postreply 18:22:04

• 天哪，比樓主的詩強多了啊，哈哈哈~~~你要多寫，please~~~ -雪晶- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/03/2022 postreply 18:33:39

• 別。。我這個湊字數，很矯揉造作，樓主的原詩感情流動自然柔和 -kirn- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/03/2022 postreply 18:50:31

• 自愧不如，尤其結尾點晴 -顫音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/03/2022 postreply 20:55:38

• 好不容易在文學城找到一個炫耀自己英語的機會，怎麽肯聽雪班的話：中文中文中文。 -龍劍- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/03/2022 postreply 18:26:51

• 哈哈哈，龍劍兄也提意見了~~~ -雪晶- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/03/2022 postreply 18:36:03

• 哈哈哈您也跟著急 -顫音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/03/2022 postreply 20:57:44

• 我來翻譯一版吧，是我一貫的風格，樓主莫怪 -木有文化- ♂ (1009 bytes) () 05/03/2022 postreply 20:49:25

• 絕妙，太多文化了 -顫音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/03/2022 postreply 20:56:26

• 好風格 -donau- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/03/2022 postreply 23:42:54

• 最牛的是你還喝光了啊 -kirn- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/04/2022 postreply 03:34:12

• 我改成了"別擔心，喝完了我去要Refund." 你看我對文學創作還是很嚴謹的 -木有文化- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/04/2022 postreply 08:04:20

• 覺得這個不合情理啊，就算有酷胖，你喝沒了也隻能refill 吧？唉，這麽一首詩搞得我對自己的英文和中文都沒信心了。 -Shubin- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/04/2022 postreply 11:20:39

• 你英文和中文都是很好滴，你沒理解，主要是你太有良心了：） -kirn- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/04/2022 postreply 16:13:19

• 謝謝鼓勵。 希望能看到樓主的中文版~~~ -Shubin- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/04/2022 postreply 18:10:27

• 牛！這樣這一對都一起扁了！！顫音好心痛。。。 -kirn- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/04/2022 postreply 16:08:54

• 哈哈，翻譯版更接地氣。 -核桃小丸子- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/04/2022 postreply 07:27:14

• tasteful -老鍵- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/04/2022 postreply 04:19:37

• it has a really nice rhythm and a good flow. keep penning. Bravo -忒忒綠- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/04/2022 postreply 07:00:00

• seconds ago:)) -忒忒綠- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/04/2022 postreply 07:04:00

• 好久沒在這裏看到你了，你這個名詞動用動得好~~~ :) -雪晶- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/04/2022 postreply 08:15:20