把“心隨各位蕩輕舟”改成“心隨落葉蕩輕舟”就交差了。
好醬油!好醬油!小建議,
所有跟帖:
• 狡猾狡猾的!經你一教,人心不古了。:) -為人父- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/07/2010 postreply 20:14:44
• 謝龍兄好建議,但不敢以落葉代各位。首聯改為:葉落瑤池逐浪遊,心隨各位蕩輕舟。 -wuwei09- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/08/2010 postreply 17:31:49
• 狡猾狡猾的!經你一教,人心不古了。:) -為人父- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/07/2010 postreply 20:14:44
• 謝龍兄好建議,但不敢以落葉代各位。首聯改為:葉落瑤池逐浪遊,心隨各位蕩輕舟。 -wuwei09- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/08/2010 postreply 17:31:49
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