怎麽就整不出那曖昧的勁兒呢

"may i feel said he" by e. e. cummings may i fell said he (i'll squeal said she just once said he) it's fun said she  (may I touch said he how much said she a lot said he) why not said she (let's go said he not too far said she what's too far said he where you are said she) may i stay said he (which way said she like this said he if you kiss said she may i move said he it is love said she) if you're willing said he (but you're killing said she but it's life said he but your wife said she now said he) ow said she (tiptop said he don't stop said she oh nn said he) go slow said she (cccome?said he ummm said she you're divine!said he (you are Mine said she)     讓我碰碰他說 (那我就喊她說 就碰一下他說) 還挺好玩她說 (能不能摸摸他說 摸哪兒她說 哪兒都摸摸他說) 那隨便吧她說 （讓我們來吧他說 不要太那個她說 哪個呀他說 你說呢她說） 我呆會兒行嗎他說 怎麽個呆法她說 就這個呆法他說 那你得親親她說 我可以做嗎他說 這算是愛嗎她說 隻要你樂意他說 會被你弄死她說 可這是生活他說 可是你老婆她說 哼……他說 唔……她說 。。。。 。。。。 。。。。 。。。。 。。。。 。。。。 。。。。 。。。。

 

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• 很不到位地整了前XI，還差兩段請窩苗舞瓜貝財匆鬼正接， -滿籠桂魚- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/06/2014 postreply 11:22:35

• 翻得不好 -WQPY- ♂ (33 bytes) () 02/06/2014 postreply 11:34:34

• 說得是啊 -滿籠桂魚- ♂ (49 bytes) () 02/06/2014 postreply 11:41:03

• 當然是 -慕容西瓜- ♀ (140 bytes) () 02/06/2014 postreply 11:35:10

• 瓜兄出手給改改？ -滿籠桂魚- ♂ (16 bytes) () 02/06/2014 postreply 12:06:11

• 俺等苗弟先出手。。。 -慕容西瓜- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/06/2014 postreply 12:40:28

• 我擦，我都羞澀了。。。請小同學們回避 -老裴0000- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/06/2014 postreply 11:29:55

• 純翻譯，純翻譯，純翻譯。。。 -滿籠桂魚- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/06/2014 postreply 11:46:26

• 唉，又有好玩的來了，怎麽辦，怎麽辦！！！ -苗盼盼- ♂ (28 bytes) () 02/06/2014 postreply 11:59:34

• 先說第一印象：原詩有很多internal rhyme，這個是翻譯的難點 -苗盼盼- ♂ (34 bytes) () 02/06/2014 postreply 12:11:45

• 還是中文比較有感覺 -大財主- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/06/2014 postreply 12:04:42

• 我理解為還是中國人比較有感覺~~~~~：） -師太明年三十八- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/06/2014 postreply 12:49:27

• 那是當然的了 -大財主- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/06/2014 postreply 12:54:35

• 齊哥昧個 -七零- ♂ (2525 bytes) () 02/06/2014 postreply 13:00:54

• 艾瑪這泥馬也叫詩！！！！！原作者誰啊拉出來TJJDS！！！！ -舞女- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/06/2014 postreply 13:32:45

• 看完苗弟的還這麽想？ -慕容西瓜- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/06/2014 postreply 13:43:44

• 前XI派高手，牛。 -whiskey72- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/06/2014 postreply 19:13:59

• 嘿嘿～ -小小毛毛蟲- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/06/2014 postreply 20:34:23