得兒如十八少艾的心令我仰慕呀!
驀然回首裏,卻是燈火闌珊;有感覺!
最後幾段更精彩,前麵的可以稍稍簡練點!“我”可以再用少點!
跟讀!
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嗬嗬,謝謝青青鼓勵:))
-得了吧-
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09/07/2009 postreply
15:53:20
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你的,唯美感覺, 唯美文字,還有唯美的心,得得,
-子衿青青-
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09/07/2009 postreply
16:57:03
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嘿,果醬果醬:))
-得了吧-
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09/07/2009 postreply
18:26:30
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