弟弟的願望

If I were in charge of the world
I`d cancel peas
bullies,and also
spinach

If I were in charge of the world
there`s be a servant to do my homework
more cats than people, and
********(our town) would be in China

If I were in charge of the world
you wouldn`t have sadness
you wouldn`t have the bad
you wouldn`t have mad
or "wait for your turn!"
you wouldn`t even have turns.

If I were in charge of the world
a hard time would be an
easy thing
all water would be juice
and a person who sometimes didn`t want to go to school
and sometimes forgot to bring stuff to the pool
would still be allowed to be in charge of the world

附一篇
my family

mom

loving and nice
calling happily
as excited as clown
if only she would stop playing with wii

dad

mean but clever
working hard
as mad as lave
if only he would cool down

my brother

evil but adventurous
punching hard
as mean as a bully
if only he would stop kicking

myself

smart but crazy
starving a lot
as fast as a car
if only he would stop curing

所有跟帖： 

• SO SWEET LITTLE THING -gingergirl- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/09/2009 postreply 09:21:43

• thanks!:) -已婚婦人- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/09/2009 postreply 13:45:02

• 弟弟太有才了！ -羅曼- ♂ (20 bytes) () 06/09/2009 postreply 09:48:02

• 弟弟太直率了！都是很簡單直接的要求~~：） -已婚婦人- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/09/2009 postreply 13:45:57

• 好棒的小詩人～～ -伊敏- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/09/2009 postreply 10:58:06

• 多謝～～ -已婚婦人- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/09/2009 postreply 13:46:18

• 好 -都是國人- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/09/2009 postreply 12:48:14

• 謝 -已婚婦人- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/09/2009 postreply 13:46:34

• 他自己寫的??? OMG!! 真強 -都是國人- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/09/2009 postreply 13:35:31

• ：） -已婚婦人- ♀ (406 bytes) () 06/09/2009 postreply 13:55:12

• 不僅僅是文筆, 還有這思想!! 8歲已如此..國人老話說 -都是國人- ♂ (131 bytes) () 06/09/2009 postreply 14:34:30

• O！比我的英語強的，無言以對！ -家有倆公主- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/09/2009 postreply 17:22:23

• 他們的命題作文 -已婚婦人- ♀ (51 bytes) () 06/09/2009 postreply 18:54:57

• 這個寫得太好了，小天才，不能不頂！ -茗毫- ♀ (76 bytes) () 06/09/2009 postreply 17:31:40

• 謝謝你的鼓勵！ -已婚婦人- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/09/2009 postreply 18:55:40

• 弟弟有些媽媽寫作的優良基因:) -twinlakes- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/10/2009 postreply 09:26:24