英詩習作：Along Golden Bay Street

   Along Golden Bay Street          

                    by Li Shen

  

         Along golden Bay Street

         I swore it:

         I should give whomever

         A loving embrace

If someone was wearing

A pair of jeans like me

Two beggars in a corner finally

Were sitting on the ground

Their jeans were so dirty

I passed them peacefully

 

            Oct. 6, 2013

 

所有跟帖： 

• Good poem, good attitude：）Thanks for sharing, have a nice weeken -南山鬆- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/17/2014 postreply 19:07:45

• 多多練筆而已,過獎了。謝謝鼓勵。 -沈漓- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/18/2014 postreply 07:14:35

• 是的,所以人們追求這個夢那個夢.謝謝讀評. -沈漓- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/18/2014 postreply 07:11:28

• Look who's coming to golden bay street? -京燕花園- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/17/2014 postreply 22:12:15

• Jingyan,who's who? :) -沈漓- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/18/2014 postreply 07:03:44

• Where is Golden Bay Street? -婉蕠- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/18/2014 postreply 00:19:29

• It's Bay Street.It's Wall St of Canada. -沈漓- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/18/2014 postreply 07:01:01

• What a humorous and funny poem. -~葉子~- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/18/2014 postreply 21:10:57

• Thanks leaf you have sense of humour -沈漓- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/25/2014 postreply 22:08:14

• Sorry, a sense of humour :) -沈漓- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/25/2014 postreply 22:10:28