英詩習作一首

        The Garage Sale

            Today I passed by Post Street,

     There the great mansions are located.

     Following the arrows flying,

     I got the last place where you were hiding.


         Modern Poetry is over fifty years old, then

    A guy said：“ My grandpa’s, pay what you can.”

         Your handwriting, your sigh and smile,

         Between pages mixed with a moldy smell.

         I put the book in the sunshine in my home,

         Now you’ll feel bright and warm.

         I know some years later, somewhere,

         My fate will be the same as well.

                               
                                             Sept. 28, 2013   

                                My first English Poem

                                      By Li Shen                                

所有跟帖： 

• 第一首詩就寫得這麽好. 讚! -~葉子~- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/02/2014 postreply 14:57:48

• 謝葉子鼓勵。俺就是喜歡文學，不愛英語。被逼無奈才 -沈漓- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/02/2014 postreply 18:58:27

• 撿起學，耗費俺精力時間無數也。請多指教。 -沈漓- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/02/2014 postreply 19:01:01

• The book is so lucky to be treasured,wonderful Gif effect,Lively -京燕花園- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/02/2014 postreply 15:35:55

• 謝京花點評！動漫謬讚也！不好意思，趣圖在網上順來。我博客上注明，這裏懶了。多指教。 -沈漓- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/02/2014 postreply 19:08:44

• Nice poem! -南山鬆- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/02/2014 postreply 17:10:55

• 謝南山鬆讀評！請多多批評。 -沈漓- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/02/2014 postreply 19:14:06

• 寫的精彩,歡迎沈漓來美語壇,也歡迎你參加美語壇的春之聲活動： -紫君- ♀ (1067 bytes) () 05/02/2014 postreply 20:44:36

• 謝謝紫君。紫氣東來，敢不從命？我會努力參加，盡情欣賞。：） -沈漓- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/02/2014 postreply 21:53:32

• You are very positive！：） -beautifulwind- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/02/2014 postreply 21:39:45

• Thanks! But beautifulwind,where were you last -沈漓- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/02/2014 postreply 22:00:43

• last winter？People missed u sooo much!:) -沈漓- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/02/2014 postreply 22:10:03

• You are a new comer here, aren't you? Nice to see you! -beautifulwind- ♀ (24 bytes) () 05/02/2014 postreply 22:18:03

• Oh,last winter was so cold that people...yr name,imagination:) -沈漓- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/03/2014 postreply 08:46:25