[美壇2013父親節原創活動] 父親如天

母親如地, 父親如天，
 

雖然如天有點遠，
 

盡管雷厲風行有點嚴,
 

父親有風就有及時雨,
 

父親有雷更有淚，不輕彈.
 

父親連著父老鄉親, 
 

父親肩扛全家重擔,
 

顫悠悠，沉甸甸，
 

下陡坡，爬危岩，
 

消逝天邊依然在眼前，
 

喊一聲父親聲哽咽,
 

望一眼遺像心頭酸,
 

這父愛大無邊,灑遍人間.
 
 

(一氣嗬成，以後再改)
 

 

GOOGLED   If the mother is like the land. Father, heaven. Although a bit far as sky, though resolutely somewhat strict,  father had timely rain wind thunder,  tears, do not cry easily.  Father attached to the world of folks,  father shoulder the burden of family, trembling, heavy, down a steep hill , climbing boulders and care of children without leisure, fade away in front of the horizon is still , cry father choked sound, mind looking a portrait with sorrow, which fatherly large infinity

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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• 走馬寫得棒, 父愛很重的份量！Happy Father's day! -京燕花園- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/15/2013 postreply 20:25:55

• Thx Banzhu! -走馬讀人- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/15/2013 postreply 21:59:00

• Great! Happy Father's day! -EnLearner- ♂ (0 bytes) () 06/15/2013 postreply 22:22:26

• 頂父親如天！ -beautifulwind- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/15/2013 postreply 22:36:03