報告Mr.Smart,新形式sonnet猶如抽象畫。

 

我覺得稱你為"假糊塗"有點不妥，我就叫你Mr.Smart吧。謝謝你告訴我你創作的MATRIX是sonnet的新形式，可是我還是沒有讀懂詩人要表達的意思，猶如抽象畫。我把押韻字的加色了，對了嗎？

Progress, present, produce, protest, reject,

Defect, update, excuse, upset, subject,

Transport, suspect, conduct, contract, increase,

project, object, record, recount, decrease,

Address, conflict, impact, compact, relay,

Insert, desert, recall, rebel, replay,

Contest, convert, convict, refuse, export,

Contrast, insult, combine, incline, import;

Answer, amount, balance, broadcast, support,

Silence, travel, neglect, question, report,

Request, surprise, embrace, repair, reply,

Respect, display, return, rescue, supply,

Compare, number, exit, dislike, design,

Machine, picture, result, influence, decline.

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P.S. 你上次寫的SORT，你說是根據計算機術語想到的，是隨意寫的，還是新詩歌的一種表達法呢？

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來源: 假糊塗 於 2013-03-19 13:11:23

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