I read it one more time,

Again a great writing, and I love it. 

- “Put on” that of Sherlock Homles  - I feel that “put on” is not very good phrase to use here, “adopt” or maybe some other words is better.

-  “put on” the burden – “carry” the burden is much better.

-  Cocaine – cocaine.

-  To be that great of a detective – I feel something is wrong with this sentence, may be “to be such a great detective”

 I could be wrong, just take it with a grain of salt. Thanks!

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• 實在太感謝了！你真厲害。那個"carry"該得尤其棒。 -viewfinder- ♀ (125 bytes) () 01/11/2012 postreply 18:42:46