This is fun

my attempts so far

Beatrice jumped/dashed to the window. The bus had just screeched/labored/hobbled to a stop. She snatched her lunch, grabbed her coat, and darted/charged/zipped out the door. Just as she swirled/slung/circled around the corner, the bus sped away

We walked (froliced/strolled/wandered) through the rain.
The elephants walked (bulldozed) through the forest.
The children walked (kicked?/blazed? their way) through the leaves

 

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詞真多!提醒,後麵那個walk的要求象聲詞。 -非文學青年- 給 非文學青年 發送悄悄話 非文學青年 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/10/2011 postreply 09:33:29

ohh, my bad -selfselfself- 給 selfselfself 發送悄悄話 selfselfself 的博客首頁 (77 bytes) () 08/10/2011 postreply 09:52:13

我的一點感想 -非文學青年- 給 非文學青年 發送悄悄話 非文學青年 的博客首頁 (145 bytes) () 08/10/2011 postreply 10:00:51

嗬嗬,你是說“打醬油”用的詞? -selfselfself- 給 selfselfself 發送悄悄話 selfselfself 的博客首頁 (0 bytes) () 08/10/2011 postreply 10:22:27

“打醬油”用詞?不知道是不是,哈哈,但是能形象地精確地用對這些詞不容易。 -非文學青年- 給 非文學青年 發送悄悄話 非文學青年 的博客首頁 (151 bytes) () 08/10/2011 postreply 10:38:49

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