那是錦上添花，但最後押韻屬於標配

Shall I compare thee to a summer's day?
Thou art more lovely and more temperate.
Rough winds do shake the darling buds of May,
And summer’s lease hath all too short a date.
Sometime too hot the eye of heaven shines,
And often is his gold complexion dimmed;
And every fair from fair sometime declines,
By chance, or nature’s changing course, untrimmed;
But thy eternal summer shall not fade,
Nor lose possession of that fair thou ow’st,
Nor shall death brag thou wand'rest in his shade,
When in eternal lines to Time thou grow'st.
    So long as men can breathe, or eyes can see,
    So long lives this, and this gives life to thee.

 

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• 啥錦上添花啊！您得去看看14行詩的格律要求了！ -行者一路歌- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/13/2021 postreply 10:09:59

• 弄個例子出來吧，看看莎士比亞有哪首14行詩句子結尾不是押韻的 -龍湖山- ♂ (844 bytes) () 05/13/2021 postreply 10:22:14

• 我的譯詩頭兩句是句尾協音韻，後兩句是句首的常韻 -行者一路歌- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/13/2021 postreply 11:48:35

• 知道為什麽嗎？ 因為西文句子比較長，所以句中押韻比中文詩詞重要性高。 -行者一路歌- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/13/2021 postreply 10:13:43