as light and graceful as the rain on the stream
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Nice!把heavy改成light,把and改成on,把wind 改成stream如何?
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05/22/2024 postreply
12:59:07
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好,我瞎寫的,並不合意(沒對上上一句),你隨便改或不用,我沒任何意見。完了我就刪我的哈 :-)
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05/22/2024 postreply
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非常棒!用enclosed rhyme 都對上了!童鞋們,接著接龍啊!已經寫出9句了,很棒!再寫7句就大功告成了:)
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05/22/2024 postreply
13:21:41
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We’re like dandelions holding small umbrellas
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05/22/2024 postreply
13:23:22
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dandelions with umbrellas? what a funny & nice image, hahaha
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05/22/2024 postreply
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每一隻蒲公英的種子都是一隻小雨傘啊!不然它怎麽會如此浪漫:)
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05/22/2024 postreply
13:35:26
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which shelter us from thunderstorm and hailstorm
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05/22/2024 postreply
15:13:10
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如果這句能用的話,算7G兄的哈;-),因為我已經蹭過兩次他的新聞填空了。謝謝!
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05/22/2024 postreply
15:33:42
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好,point taken!能否換成the thunderstorm?這樣容易押韻
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05/22/2024 postreply
17:03:49
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改了,又加了一個 hailstorms,不然覺得有點短。可以嗎? 謝謝
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05/22/2024 postreply
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我覺得挺好!能不用複數嗎?
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05/23/2024 postreply
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We huddle and hold together to stay warm
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05/23/2024 postreply
19:40:52
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And light up each other's sky like estrellas
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05/23/2024 postreply
22:04:55
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Amazing!!!等我有時間把整首歌詞呈現出來:)
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05/24/2024 postreply
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Great! It's a nice poem. You inspired me :)
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05/24/2024 postreply
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