The sun keeps working (5 syllables)
on a tear for eighteen months (7)
He takes the day off (5)
to propose to his true love(7)
with a golden diamond ring (7)
(Pic from Internet)
Tanka這種形式,
又有數字,又有詩意,很好玩!
歡迎大家接著來玩!
The sun keeps working (5 syllables)
on a tear for eighteen months (7)
He takes the day off (5)
to propose to his true love(7)
with a golden diamond ring (7)
(Pic from Internet)
Tanka這種形式,
又有數字,又有詩意,很好玩!
歡迎大家接著來玩!
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Nice try! This poem needs to be read out to count syllibles.
-盈盈一笑間-
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04/10/2024 postreply
16:42:26
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It's also very imaginative.
-盈盈一笑間-
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04/10/2024 postreply
16:47:14
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盈盈是音節專家!:)on a tear是idiom,having great success over a period
-妖妖靈-
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04/10/2024 postreply
17:36:13
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of time.也不知道這麽用對嗎?
-妖妖靈-
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04/10/2024 postreply
17:36:57
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Very imaginative! With a diamond ring to propose! Love it!
-暖冬cool夏-
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04/10/2024 postreply
19:48:42
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謝謝暖冬MM鼓勵!我又看了昨天Tanka詩的例子,發現要用複合句,然後那幾個畫麵聯係起來就寫成了:)propose後麵
-妖妖靈-
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04/10/2024 postreply
20:15:58
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應該有to,我為了湊音節,就把lifelong改成true了:)
-妖妖靈-
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04/10/2024 postreply
20:17:01
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你也來練練吧!我發現寫的過程是真正把知識變成自己的過程,寫出來很開心:)
-妖妖靈-
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04/10/2024 postreply
20:19:30
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寫詩太難了,需要靈感:)先多讀你們的,謝謝妖mm!
-暖冬cool夏-
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04/10/2024 postreply
21:21:29
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