Tanka practice: The solar eclipse

本帖於 2024-04-10 21:17:17 時間, 由普通用戶 妖妖靈 編輯

The sun keeps working (5 syllables)

on a tear for eighteen months (7)

He takes the day off (5)

to propose to his true love(7)

with a golden diamond ring (7)

(Pic from Internet)

 

Tanka這種形式,

又有數字,又有詩意,很好玩!

歡迎大家接著來玩!

 

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