攜習作給大家拜年！

其實就算沒有習作，也會來拜年的：）本來想來貼一首中文詩，總覺得有些…… 還好，我的《佳思地77號》英譯發表了，就摘一段放這裏吧。今天再讀，還是覺得有些不可圈不可點，實在還得再努力精改（目標就是整理進英文小說集）。也請美語壇老師們多多賜教指點。用廣東話說，就是謝謝先：）

 My garage and house were connected. When the garage door was shut down behind me, I would feel I was home safe without a doubt.

I slowly pulled my car into the garage and closed the door right after.  Just as I was getting out of the car and about to open the door to the house, I heard something moving behind me. Before I was able to turn around, a man’s voice uttered: “No rush; slowly get in!”

I had watched enough movies and heard enough stories to realize what was going on. Although that voice was pretty low and calm, my hands were sweaty and cold. My entire body was trembling with fear.

“Open the door – No, put the other hand up.” The guy ordered again.

“Ok, Ok.” While OK’ing, I raised one hand and tried to open the door with the other shivering hand.

I dared not to turn around.

Finally I entered the living room and put my purse on the couch. My left hand was still up in the air.

“Now sit down, slowly.” The man behind me continued to make demands.

I slowly turned around and sat down quietly on the coach, still with my head down.

What if he is a rapist? My brain stopped functioning when that idea occurred to me.

“Don’t be scared like that. I am not a bad guy.” He said, as if he had seen through my mind. 

 

這是該小說的刊發鏈接，是連載，目前隻到  part1 : http://guwahatian.guwahaticity.in/Vol3_Issue1/TalesofMind_article2

謝謝了，拜年了，祝美語壇版主和朋友們、作家們老師們猴年吉祥如意, 安康幸福，事業順達！

也接地謝謝美語壇外一直默默幫助我提高英文的蓋瑞老師！

 

 

 

所有跟帖： 

• 小說發表了，祝賀祝賀！ -~葉子~- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/09/2016 postreply 16:00:23

• 謝謝葉子，新年快樂，吉祥如意！ -虔謙- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/09/2016 postreply 18:14:27

• 祝賀小說發表！新春快樂！ -beautifulwind- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/09/2016 postreply 22:29:24

• 謝謝美風，新春快樂！ -虔謙- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/10/2016 postreply 22:53:43

• An interesting story, though there are some typos, -rancho2008- ♀ (460 bytes) () 02/09/2016 postreply 22:42:39

• 下載了，感謝指正！ -虔謙- ♀ (157 bytes) () 02/10/2016 postreply 22:55:47

• 美譚的大作家很高產啊。祝賀。 -rockcurrent- ♂ (0 bytes) () 02/10/2016 postreply 10:50:00

• 不敢不敢，謝謝你的祝賀，問好！ -虔謙- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/10/2016 postreply 22:57:48

• 如果我沒弄錯，你是學中文出身的吧？ -autumnjune- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/10/2016 postreply 15:53:25

• 是的。英文啃得吃力…… -虔謙- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/10/2016 postreply 22:59:00

• 很吸引人的開頭．謝謝虔謙分享，新春快樂! -南山鬆- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/10/2016 postreply 17:14:02

• 謝謝南山鬆，新春快樂！ -虔謙- ♀ (0 bytes) () 02/10/2016 postreply 22:53:14