Riptide

Riptide （August 25）

 

I tried to reach the other shore
wishing to reach you

I sank into the water
not realizing what pulled me down below

The voice was floating
quickly drowned before memory sets

Sun rises
Sun sets
Deep inside that shadow hides

Nothing happened
Nothing gone
Nothing will change the world around

所有跟帖： 

• 生動形象的小詩，若配上你的朗誦就更好了。 -~葉子~- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/25/2015 postreply 12:45:31

• TKS ...might later on -Flyingstraw- ♀ (0 bytes) () 08/25/2015 postreply 19:39:33

• A well-written poem. Happy Labor Day to you. -婉蕠- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/07/2015 postreply 11:34:34

• TKS. Same to you. -Flyingstraw- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/07/2015 postreply 14:01:50