I corrected a number of mistakes.

Please take a look again if you get a chance.

Many thanks.

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• Okay, it's good you have corrected some of them yourself, -rancho2008- ♀ (5571 bytes) () 07/23/2015 postreply 15:28:09

• I am grateful. I updated the writing. -JasmineZ- ♀ (992 bytes) () 07/25/2015 postreply 04:07:13

• More discussion -rancho2008- ♀ (3323 bytes) () 07/25/2015 postreply 11:20:06

• I can't thank you enough! -JasmineZ- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/26/2015 postreply 03:39:35

• Nice proof-reading and correction. -niteBynite- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/26/2015 postreply 05:46:35

• Thank you. Let the colors in the text signify my appreciations -JasmineZ- ♀ (55 bytes) () 07/26/2015 postreply 05:58:30