The article have been revised. Many thanks to you all!

I am impressed and humbled. The revision has been made and the corrections are highlighted in red (

http://blog.wenxuecity.com/myoverview/69243/)

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• I just read your revised essay, and most of the errors are now c -rancho2008- ♀ (173 bytes) () 07/11/2015 postreply 00:13:32

• Further revisions have been made -JasmineZ- ♀ (216 bytes) () 07/11/2015 postreply 08:02:34

• 昨天給你提的兩處你還沒改。其一 -youdecide- ♂ (129 bytes) () 07/11/2015 postreply 08:34:46

• 我這個白 癡又上當了。 -youdecide- ♂ (51 bytes) () 07/11/2015 postreply 09:50:38

• Discuss: 20-mile-trip -JasmineZ- ♀ (368 bytes) () 07/11/2015 postreply 11:52:47

• 9-year-old 可以 -youdecide- ♂ (69 bytes) () 07/11/2015 postreply 12:27:13

• Thank you. -JasmineZ- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/13/2015 postreply 04:20:56

• After your second revision, -rancho2008- ♀ (4571 bytes) () 07/11/2015 postreply 14:12:48

• One more -rancho2008- ♀ (81 bytes) () 07/11/2015 postreply 18:04:06

• Revised. Thanks a million. -JasmineZ- ♀ (180 bytes) () 07/12/2015 postreply 01:40:41

• Did you actually correct them? Many errors are still there. -rancho2008- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/12/2015 postreply 08:52:10

• It is updated now. I must have hit 'Cancel' instead of update -JasmineZ- ♀ (139 bytes) () 07/13/2015 postreply 04:18:05

• There are more left uncorrected or your corrections are wrong -rancho2008- ♀ (2063 bytes) () 07/13/2015 postreply 12:10:35

• Updated. Thank you. -JasmineZ- ♀ (99 bytes) () 07/14/2015 postreply 04:58:40