回複：Stop Twice (A Writing Exercise) 一個寫作練習

"Oh, you didn't even say hello to me this morning." Nancy said.

"Yes I was so busy. " I explained. --> "No, I didn't. I was ...

... is paint up and powder up and go bad! --> ... is to paint up, powder up and go bad!

 

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• It was just the oppsite. -wave_forest- ♂ (2 bytes) () 02/27/2014 postreply 14:41:34

• 回複：謝謝指出病句。讓我想起有些他們日常說的 I go get it等句應該是病句吧？ -wave_forest- ♂ (372 bytes) () 02/27/2014 postreply 14:40:21