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【Poem Reading Tuesday】all the time I pray to Buddha by Kobayashi

(2024-02-27 07:26:27) 下一個

[all the time I pray to Buddha]
by Kobayashi Issa
Translated by Robert Hass

All the time I pray to Buddha
I keep on
    killing mosquitoes.

Source: The Essential Haiku: Versions of Basho Buson and Issa (The Ecco Press, 1994)

About the author
Kobayashi Issa | Poetry Foundation

About Haiku
Haiku (or hokku) | Poetry Foundation
10 Vivid Haikus to Leave you Breathless - Read Poetry
Haiku | Academy of American Poets
The History and Artistry of Haiku | FSI (stanford.edu)

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CBA7 回複 悄悄話 回複 '歲月沈香' 的評論 : 謝謝香香點評。這三句是日本俳句,具有諷刺意味。解讀,可以參見下麵ChatGPT的詩歌分析。

ChatGPT Poem Analysis:

This haiku by Kobayashi Issa is a profound reflection on the contradiction between the speaker's spiritual devotion and their mundane actions. Here's a breakdown of the analysis:

Spiritual Devotion: The speaker expresses their continuous prayers to Buddha, indicating a deep spiritual connection or religious practice. This line sets the tone for the poem, highlighting a sense of reverence or piety.

Contradiction: Despite their devout prayers, the speaker acknowledges the simultaneous act of killing mosquitoes. This presents a stark contrast between their spiritual aspirations and the mundane, even violent, actions they perform in daily life.

Irony: The juxtaposition of praying to Buddha and killing mosquitoes creates irony. Mosquitoes are commonly seen as pests or nuisances, yet the act of killing them conflicts with the principles of compassion and non-violence often associated with Buddhist teachings.

Human Imperfection: The haiku captures the human condition of imperfection and the struggle to reconcile conflicting aspects of oneself. It suggests that even in moments of devotion or prayer, individuals may still engage in actions that contradict their beliefs or values.

Overall, this haiku invites reflection on the complexities of human nature, the tension between spirituality and practicality, and the constant struggle to align one's actions with their beliefs.

歲月沈香 回複 悄悄話 哈哈,這兩句詩好有趣:)也許他殺了蚊子是殺生,祈禱佛主原諒他的罪過:)謝謝小C分享!
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