CBA7的心靈港灣
一個“自由撰稿人”，一個海外原創的個人文集。Write a poem simple, deep, and unforgettable.
正文
Mountain is green wind is gentle Sun is not hot
I'm sitting in a fishing boat by a lake
not fishing
My children catching butterflies in the air nearby
Mountain is green wind is gentle Sun is not hot
I'm sitting in a fishing boat by a lake
thinking
what if I'm a fish
and my children are butterflies?
Author notes:
I enjoy the tranquility and freedom of the nature and would love to be a fish while my children to be butterflies. However, on the other hand, fish or butterflies may be caught by human and lose their freedom, even their lives. So, it seems like a dilemma.
For the first line in both stanzas, I intended not to use punctuations, so it sounds more poetic and flows like water without any breaks.
同一首詩，不同的讀者讀後的感覺可能會不同。這首詩下麵的注解，隻不過是讓讀者們了解一下我寫這首詩的時候的心境以及這首詩想要表達的深層次的寓意。