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詞牌《虞美人》試填【駿馬奔騰】

(2023-07-24 15:22:38) 下一個

》詞牌[虞美人]試填【駿馬奔騰】

這曲美麗的歌名叫【RUN FOR THE ROSES】,原唱歌星是Dan Fogelberg,他簡直把這首歌是唱神了。是有關Kentucky Derby賽馬的事兒,就不多介紹細節了。
昨天有時間把以前的發過的歌兒梳理了一下,又發現了還為這個美麗的歌兒,填了一曲[虞美人]的詞牌詩歌。當時找來找去,好像這個[虞美人]可以試試。絞盡腦汁的想辦法,平仄押韻看來都照顧到了。意境嗎,肯定還有改進的空間,有請有心人提建議。先亮出來看看能不能拋磚引玉,不然就是自娛自樂好玩了。
》傑克和歌星Dan Fogelberg同唱助興

下載了幾副圖片,為上麵的詞牌《虞美人》上彩潤色!

》玫瑰加冕 

歌詞:Run for the Roses 歌星:Dan Fogelberg
Born in the valley And raised in the trees
Of western Kentucky On wobbly knees
With mama beside you To help you along
You'll soon be growing up strong All the long, lazy mornings
In pastures of green The sun on your withers
The wind in your mane Could never prepare you
For what lies ahead The run for the roses so red
And it's run for the roses  As fast as you can
You fate is delivered  Your moment's at hand
It's the chance of a lifetime  In a lifetime of chance
And it's high time you joined in the dance
It's high time you joined  In the dance
From sire to sire  It's born in the blood
The fire of a mare And the strength of a stud
It's breeding and it's training
And it's something unknown  That drives you
And carries you home  And it's run for the roses  
As fast as you can  Your fate is delivered  
Your moment's at hand  
It's the chance of a lifetime
In a lifetime of chance
And it's high time you joined in the dance

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