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女兒的短篇小說

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女兒九歲,酷愛讀書.去年忽然決定參加學校的短篇小說比賽.第一次寫得了年級第一.俺這當羊媽的異常激動.從沒寫過博克.但決定將此文章發表,共有子女的家長共享.

 The Twelve Wolves of Destiny!

In a misty and very cold forest, there was a wolf just born. She was white and had blue eyes. Her parents named her Snowdrop. Her future was a secret that even fortune tellers wolfs from the North couldn’t see.

You might be wondering why her fortune could never be seen. Well, it’s a long story but I’ll tell you anyway.

Snowdrop was no ordinary animal. She was one of the chosen wolves of destiny. Now that’s why, legendary wolves’ future cannot be seen. There was a legend that 12 wolves would answer the call, of goodness falling and evil rising. Another animal will help their way. They shall stop evil, and good shall rule again. So the world will live in a barrier of peace for a long time to come.

When she was older, she learned to hunt her prey and to work together with the pack. Highly royal wolves came from the woods looking for the members of The 12 wolves of destiny. They tested every single wolf in the Arctic to see who the 12 were.

Snowdrop got picked with 11 other wolves. They were Cathie, Scout, Athena, Percy, Jason, Annebeth, Kate, Bob, Steve, Piper, Tyler. They were all Snowdrops’ age except for Bob who was a year younger. They all greeted each other with excitement of the new quest ahead.

The leader of Snowdrops’ pack stood tall and said “You were chosen by destiny to make evil retreat our earth. Sapphire will explain and guide you on your quest. Do not underestimate her. An artic fox leaped through the snow landing at the wolves’ feet. Bob said” so this is the great and powerful Sapphire, an artic fox?” “Didn’t I say not to underestimate her.” said the leader of the pack. Bob groaned. “Let begin our quest!” said Sapphire.

They ran for hours and Snowdrop couldn’t see because of a blizzard. They FINALLY stopped for the night. Sapphire huddled between two trees and the wolves slept in the snow. Their eyes drifted away into a nights rest.

Snowdrop had the worst nightmare of her whole life. There was this weird creature that looked like a were wolf with wings and could breathe fire. It said “You must be perished from the universe so evil can destroy the earth.” She was chained from a rope above magma. The creature took out a knife and cut the rope leaving her falling to her death. She woke up with a start waking everyone else up except Bob who was dreaming of hamburgers.

Piper and Percy howled, they were trapped in a cage. Sapphire was small enough to squeeze out of the cage. She ran away to get them out of there. She ran into the same creature Snowdrop dreamed of. The creature said “We are the dragburto’s. We only need one wolf, that one.” He pointed to snowdrop. Sapphire growled and attacked them. She was swift, fast, and tough. She knocked the creature down. Alarms blared. She knocked down the dragburitos and ran towards a button that would set free the wolves. She hopped on the button and the wolves were set free.

They knocked over the monsters and Annebeth found an object that the dragburto’s were upsets with, there eggs. She picked up the eggs with her teeth and shattering them a mile away. The dragburitos flew towards there precious eggs determined to save them. They had survived the monsters.

Jason found a piece of parchment and started to read. There’s a legend that would answer the call, bleh! I already know that one. He skipped to the end. “The end of the war will be in California, to evil of good, the world’s fate leads to this battle. “ Snowdrop said” Now we know what we are doing! All we need to do is find a map and go to California. Does anyone have a map?” “Why would any wolf carry a map around?” said Athena. “Wait, wait, and here it is.” Athena yelped in shock. Athena said” Why would you bring a map, Steve.” “Always comes in handy. Okay. This is a magical map. It can show us where we are. Okay, we are in Texas. All we need to do is run another 1,318 miles.” “WHAT!” Jason yelped. ”How long is that going to take. “?About a week nonstop.” Said Steve. “This is going to be a nightmare unless we find a train. Well, speaking of trains, there was a train that just pulled up on our right to go to Arizona and it will only take a few hours. Then we can take it Arizona to California. Say, where in California is this?” “It says at the bottom of the page in small print San Diego. Yay, we can go to the zoo! Said Tyler sarcastically. Let’s get moving! Said Sapphire.

They ran onto the train before it could leave. They talked about the quest. It was quite boring. This is how it went.

Annebeth: This is taking FOREVER. Percy: Stop complaining. Snowdrop: Be quite, both of you. Let’s think about the task in hands. We can run to California of ride a train, which one? Bob: Lets run. Tyler: okay…

A few hours later…


“We are finally in Arizona. “ Said Sapphire “Is everybody ready to run?” “Yes!” The twelve of them said at the same time. They ran for hours and there was finally a sign that said Welcome to San Diego. Snowdrop then started a conversation. “Why did they want me?” “Maybe because they need you for something special.” Said Athena. “Well, I did have a dream about the dragburitos. They said something about killing me so the universe can fall.” Explained Snowdrop. “Let’s think of something else, okay?” said Sapphire. “OK” said Snowdrop.

They walked a little bit further but then a dark cloud with purple lightning flashed through the sky. Evil’s powers were getting stronger. The twelve (thirteen counting Sapphire) ran to the heart of the cloud where evils armies were waiting for them. Sapphire said “Everybody, I know that there is a leader for this pack of monsters. He is at the top of the building, Snowdrop; evil must fear you most if they want you destroyed. Go and defeat him” “Okay:” said snowdrop.

They last battle has begun. Monsters charged at the twelve animals. Snowdrop was avoiding monsters and racing to the top. When she got there, there was a figure in a black clock waiting for her. It turned around and said “So you are the great Snowdrop? I heard rumors about you.” Snowdrop yelps. The guy was a black wolf with red eyes. He had a red diamond on his back and called himself The Red Diamond. He attacked Snowdrop.

She was dodging and not getting hurt. The guy only trusted his jaw, not his brain. When Snowdrop dodged it in front of a wall, CRASH! He bonked into the wall. She kept on doing what she just did. BING BAM CRASH BOOM! He was knocked out from his head bonking into the wall to many times. She made him crash his head one more time and POOF! He turned into a trail of black smoke. The monsters disappeared in seconds, the cloud turned back to white. She defeated The Red Diamond!

She met with the others and told them about her victory. When she got back home, she was the leader of the tribe and every wolf called her and the others heroes. Evil still stirs. What will it do next? No one knows but at least it is peaceful in the world.


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• 讚! -ca981-給 ca981 發送悄悄話 ca981 的博客首頁 ca981 的個人群組 (0 bytes) (3 reads) 2/25/13 05:11:30
• 謝謝! 我這個老媽一點功勞都沒有. -長在紅旗下-給 長在紅旗下 發送悄悄話 長在紅旗下 的博客首頁 長在紅旗下 的個人群組 (0 bytes) (2 reads) 2/25/13 06:40:15
• 功勞是有的。太謙虛。 -x88-給 x88 發送悄悄話 x88 的個人群組 (0 bytes) (2 reads) 2/25/13 08:45:05
• 有才!! -迷迷-給 迷迷 發送悄悄話 迷迷 的個人群組 (0 bytes) (2 reads) 2/25/13 05:16:18
• 謝謝。女兒從五歲半才開始讀書,四年不到已超過老媽,不可思議! -長在紅旗下-給 長在紅旗下 發送悄悄話 長在紅旗下 的博客首頁 長在紅旗下 的個人群組 (0 bytes) (4 reads) 2/25/13 06:29:15
• 行文不錯。 -CirrusCloud-給 CirrusCloud 發送悄悄話 CirrusCloud 的博客首頁 CirrusCloud 的個人群組 (0 bytes) (2 reads) 2/25/13 06:16:24
• 回複:行文不錯。 -長在紅旗下-給 長在紅旗下 發送悄悄話 長在紅旗下 的博客首頁 長在紅旗下 的個人群組 (1640 bytes) (68 reads) 2/25/13 06:27:19
  謝謝各位,獻醜了。女兒從五歲半才開始讀書,四年不到已超過老媽,不可思議!
• 她平常很喜歡寫嗎? 喜歡一夲書反複讀嗎? -CirrusCloud-給 CirrusCloud 發送悄悄話 CirrusCloud 的博客首頁 CirrusCloud 的個人群組 (0 bytes) (1 reads) 2/25/13 06:31:06
• 她平常除學校的作業很少寫. 喜歡一夲書反複讀N遍.不過厚厚的書一天可以讀一本. -長在紅旗下-給 長在紅旗下 發送悄悄話 長在紅旗下 的博客首頁 長在紅旗下 的個人群組 (0 bytes) (13 reads) 2/25/13 06:38:15
• 頂! -霧裏看花123-給 霧裏看花123 發送悄悄話 霧裏看花123 的博客首頁 霧裏看花123 的個人群組 (0 bytes) (9 reads) 2/25/13 06:57:18
• 謝謝!可惜小女中文不會,光英文了。 -長在紅旗下-給 長在紅旗下 發送悄悄話 長在紅旗下 的博客首頁 長在紅旗下 的個人群組 (0 bytes) (2 reads) 2/25/13 07:01:10
• 這個是天賦哈,知道一個女孩每年都得全國作文詩歌名次,被出版。 -黃桷樹-給 黃桷樹 發送悄悄話 黃桷樹 的個人群組 (0 bytes) (7 reads) 2/25/13 07:20:56
• 謝謝! 我想鼓勵她多寫.可惜俺閨女是不聽任何人的,除非她想幹. -長在紅旗下-給 長在紅旗下 發送悄悄話 長在紅旗下 的博客首頁 長在紅旗下 的個人群組 (0 bytes) (4 reads) 2/25/13 07:37:43
• 不擔心,一輩子隻寫的作家粉成功~~~ -黃桷樹-給 黃桷樹 發送悄悄話 黃桷樹 的個人群組 (0 bytes) (11 reads) 2/25/13 07:41:47
• 哈, 利, 波, 特,居然被自動消失了???? -黃桷樹-給 黃桷樹 發送悄悄話 黃桷樹 的個人群組 (0 bytes) (1 reads) 2/25/13 07:43:22
• 哈利波特是小女第一套最喜歡的, 三年級全套至少讀了七八遍. -長在紅旗下-給 長在紅旗下 發送悄悄話 長在紅旗下 的博客首頁 長在紅旗下 的個人群組 (0 bytes) (3 reads) 2/25/13 07:47:33
• 厲害。未來之星。 -睿睿媽-給 睿睿媽 發送悄悄話 睿睿媽 的博客首頁 睿睿媽 的個人群組 (0 bytes) (2 reads) 2/25/13 07:50:52
• 謝謝! 從小她喜歡的東西包括電影,書籍都會看N遍直到背下來. -長在紅旗下-給 長在紅旗下 發送悄悄話 長在紅旗下 的博客首頁 長在紅旗下 的個人群組 (0 bytes) (5 reads) 2/25/13 07:55:32
• 天賦和堅持加一塊兒了!這孩子素質很好! -DUMARTINI-給 DUMARTINI 發送悄悄話 DUMARTINI 的博客首頁 DUMARTINI 的個人群組 (0 bytes) (2 reads) 2/25/13 11:51:13
• 謝杜姐捧場! 今天我閨女回家一定跟她說接著寫下去! -長在紅旗下-給 長在紅旗下 發送悄悄話 長在紅旗下 的博客首頁 長在紅旗下 的個人群組 (0 bytes) (1 reads) 2/25/13 12:04:21
• 前途無量! -夏圓-給 夏圓 發送悄悄話 夏圓 的博客首頁 夏圓 的個人群組 (0 bytes) (1 reads) 2/25/13 19:28:51
• 謝謝圓圓MM! 哈哈,看來我這羊媽當得不錯. -長在紅旗下-給 長在紅旗下 發送悄悄話 長在紅旗下 的博客首頁 長在紅旗下 的個人群組 (0 bytes) (0 reads) 2/26/13 04:40:53
• Could't believe it's written by a 9-year -九月獨處-給 九月獨處 發送悄悄話 九月獨處 的博客首頁 九月獨處 的個人群組 (0 bytes) (4 reads) 2/26/13 09:19:26
• 謝謝九月妹! 女兒的想象力是沒地說的, 記憶力也好. 這下得鼓勵她多寫. -長在紅旗下-給 長在紅旗下 發送悄悄話 長在紅旗下 的博客首頁 長在紅旗下 的個人群組 (0 bytes) (1 reads) 2/26/13 10:19:38
• WOW!~~ -九月獨處-給 九月獨處 發送悄悄話 九月獨處 的博客首頁 九月獨處 的個人群組 (158 bytes) (6 reads) 2/26/13 09:21:36
   Can't believe it's from a 9-year-old girl, amazing!~~~ she has a tremendous talent in writing and you got to provide more nutrution for her to grow!!~~
• 來晚了,杜姐,圓圓都在我上麵。 -粉玫瑰-給 粉玫瑰 發送悄悄話 粉玫瑰 的博客首頁 粉玫瑰 的個人群組 (0 bytes) (2 reads) 2/27/13 09:10:16





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阿小餅 回複 悄悄話 佩服的不行了額,額讓額崽來看來讀然後又去TING。。。。。娃娃們的榜樣啊。你是怎麽教的啊?寫寫教閨女的事情吧。先謝謝了!

等著看畫畫的故事。:)
長在紅旗下 回複 悄悄話 回複DUMARTINI的評論:
打算寫一個她畫的畫。這陣太忙,下月哈!
長在紅旗下 回複 悄悄話 回複白玫瑰花的評論:
謝謝白玫瑰花大才女來訪!等過一陣試試。
DUMARTINI 回複 悄悄話 新博客在哪兒啊?
白玫瑰花 回複 悄悄話 你也要多寫點啊!要不就post多點你女兒的作品!^_^
白玫瑰花 回複 悄悄話 太有天分了。寫的真好!應該鼓勵她一直寫下去,應該會寫的更好!
長在紅旗下 回複 悄悄話 回複翠花姐的評論:
謝謝翠花姐來訪!你們都是俺的偶像!小女下個月十歲,還太小。正在寫Chapter Book。愛好太多.還不知到將來幹啥,看以後了哈!
翠花姐 回複 悄悄話 9歲的小女孩寫的這樣好,真真個小才女哦!是不是遺傳了紅旗mm的文采天分哦?

太喜歡了,希望mm能多寫博文雜談、兒女經來和大家分享哦!

周末快樂!
長在紅旗下 回複 悄悄話 回複阿小餅的評論:
謝謝老朋友光臨!俺可不是才女,拉閨女出來顯擺顯擺。她現在寫的小說都不讓俺看了。怕俺又那出去特澀。
阿小餅 回複 悄悄話 太油菜了,估計功夫熊貓都不一定是這位小狼的對手呢,寫得太精彩了,大力頂起!
阿小餅 回複 悄悄話 先在大才女這裏占個座,回頭仔細讀。:)

才氣是可以遺傳的,額絕對相信:))
長在紅旗下 回複 悄悄話 回複小艾媽媽的評論:
謝謝!才發現我的偶像駕到。
小艾媽媽 回複 悄悄話 羨慕嫉妒,不恨,好有才氣的孩子,這是天分,就開懷的笑吧。
DUMARTINI 回複 悄悄話 女兒的想象力明顯是遺傳來的,我肯定~~~~

謝謝分享,小才女一個 媽媽的驕傲啊!
tenyu 回複 悄悄話 紅旗家裡有這麼好的孩子。跟你一起高興!有個好孩子比有什麼都好。
長在紅旗下 回複 悄悄話 再謝圓圓MM! 她的想像力豐富不知從哪來的.我的早被抹殺了,哈哈哈
夏圓 回複 悄悄話 紅旗MM, 你女兒很有寫作天賦,想像力豐富,我讀著讀著就被你女兒帶進了她創造的世界裏。堅持寫下去,前途無量!祝賀她得了年級第一,也祝賀你這位好媽媽!
長在紅旗下 回複 悄悄話 謝謝老鄉.還需再接再厲,繼續努力.
粉玫瑰 回複 悄悄話 先恭禧一下,家有小才女!
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