白露自描

The melancholy, behind the joyful face
the peaceful heart, experiencing the mighty waves
seeking, between the broken and the perfection
patrolling, between the reality and the dreams
for truly feeling and goodness
 

[楓丹白露]

回複胡渙的評論:

這一改，真是妙筆，采納了! 謝謝

[胡渙]

楓丹：這樣改一下如何：

The melancholy, behind the joyful face
the peaceful heart, experiencing the mighty waves
seeking, between the broken and the perfection
patrolling, between the reality and the dreams
for truly feeling and goodness

各人的口味不同，以你的為準了~~