The Trumpeter Swan

-- By Little S at 5 years old

On the first day of February, mama swan was busy laying her eggs, and papa swan was busy doing exercises.

On the second day of February, the eggs hatched!  Two baby swans popped out their heads from the eggs. Mama swan and papa swan gave them names: Rosy and Sally.

On the third day of February, mama swan and papa swan gave their babies a ride to the lake.  After that, they had a fly race. Sally lost the game, and Rosy won.

The next day, they tried again, and Sally lost again. Mama swan told Sally:"You need to practice and practice. Practice makes perfect!"

Then, they tried again, and Sally still lost.  Rosy won the trophy!

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用詞嚴謹條理清楚。我女兒5歲時寫不了這樣的文字。祝賀。