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Creative Writing --Max 造句 (4)

(2010-06-21 20:37:16) 下一個

Max’s way of making sentences

Max又造句了。他獨出心裁地把老師給的5個不相關的造句的詞,揉在一起,寫成一個paragrahy小故事段裏,每次他還寫上兩段。

讓我歡喜的是,通過Max的造句,我發現他的小腦袋瓜裏還是有一些思想的,裝的不光是電子遊戲。。。

1 properly 2permanent 3 perfectly 4 deserving 5 blistering造句

Doing things properly is awesome. It might even become a permanent habit. If you do it perfectly, it’s even better than doing it properly. That tells you if you’re deserving greatness or failure, but your hands might be blistering. That’s why doing things properly is the best.

I wonder what it would be like if everything was blistering. The blisters would be permanent. The blisters would be properly shaped and perfectly pussy. But we wouldn’t be deserving that, would we? So we don’t want that to happen.

 

1 government 2 permanent 3 consumer 4 everlasting 5 cavities造句

I like the government. But it’s a consumer of our money. Hopefully they don’t have everlasting cavities.I want the government to be permanent.

Everlasting cavities are weird. I don’t like them. I hope the government makes it against the law to have everlasting cavities. Maybe the law will be permanent. Who is the consumer of our pain?


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