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Creative Writing --Max 造句(2)

(2010-04-16 08:26:46) 下一個

這學期,Max每周都有造句作業,我一直懷疑他是理解錯了如何造句,每次他都是把老師給的幾個不相關的詞寫成一個段子,一寫還就是兩個。如果他是理解錯了,那真是一個美麗的錯誤,我希望他將錯就錯、知錯不改、一錯再錯。。。


Max’s way of making sentences


1 twirl 2 thirsty 3 squirrrel 4 chirp 5 birth 造句 


I wonder what a birth of squirrel feels like? It probably can’t chirp but maybe it can. It’ll probably get thirsty in a few minutes. The mom might do a big twirl. It might feel weird.


What if there was a weird thirsty squirrel outside of your window? And it would always chirp every time you went somewhere. It twirls all around the branches an a tree. It eventually gives birth to even more annoying squirrels. I’d probably do something bad to it.

 


1 scratch 2 scream 3 score 4 scorch 5 scare 造句


I don’t like when I get a scare. I scream and then keep score of how many scares I get. I try not to scorch it in my head. In the end I scratch my head wondering what I screamed about. So it takes a lot of time when I got a scare.


One day I saw a man scorch a tree. I got a little scare and did a little scream. He kicked as if he wanted to score in soccer. I wondered if I should scratch my head or not. In the end we ran away simultaneously.

 


1 unusual 2 unique 3 uniform 4 computer 5 confused 造句


I don’t know what a uniform is like because I don’t have one. Are they unique or unusual? I bet uniforms don’t have computers on them. I wonder if uniforms get people confused.I don’t ever want a uniform.


My computer is very weird. It got me very confused and mad. It’s very unique and unusual. I was looking for a uniform when it froze and shut down which was when it got me confused and mad. Now, I hate my computer… just kidding!!!




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