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Creative Writing --Max 造句(1)

(2010-02-23 09:35:52) 下一個

今天一早,我看到Max攤在桌上的作業本,看了他寫的作業。他獨出心裁的造句,實在是讓我喜歡、高興。


老師要求他們用
Strok slope remote control chose 5個詞各造一個句子。Max卻別開生麵地把這5不相關的詞揉在一起,放入一個paragrahy小故事段裏,他還寫了兩個paragrahy


Today I had a stroke. I got it while I chose a remote. I needed a remote to control my robot. Did I mention I also slipped on a slope at the same time? I can’t believe I got a stroke.


Today I chose a cat for my pet. I have total control over it. How you ask, by using this remote. I stroke its fur softly and then we both fell down a slope. I like my cat!




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