博大家一笑-- 我家老大正在寫的一個故事

大家可能看不到的進步是現在分行是整個字分了， 以前是寫到哪個字母就分到哪個字母。

*注： 她的錯字我都沒改， 直接打出來的*

XXX was a Princess, a Pertty Princess. (*關鍵時刻就有南方口音? XXX是我的名字*)
a Pertty gardener Princess. a
evil woralder that had wanted (*woralder是什麽？ 我們猜是War Lord*)
to throw her in a tower and
Never un lock her. his name was
Earac. he was meaner than any
other worarlder. he was so bad
he could make the
gardener pr princess cry.
it was good there was a Prince
Named XXXX. he was handsomer *XXXX是爸爸的名字*
than any Prince. he was
stronger than any other
Prince. he was stranger (*LOL*)
Than any other Prince.
and he was a hunter prince
who shoots Anamils in the
forest. he has Arows that
Shoot thogh his bow
bow that shoot the
Anamils. for their dinner
tey eat deers wild deers
they eat wild horses and
they eat all kinds of
things since the
live in the forest.
She got trappt and
Prince ran on his deer and
rided his deer to the tower.
but he couldent make it
that good cause it took
18 days and years to go to
the tower. she was so
far away up in the
tower.

[cncjcc]

太優秀了，pre-K 就會這麽寫了，真不錯。 最好笑的是prince charming 是騎著鹿救公主的，哇哈哈哈， 最後還太困難了，好像沒救著。