一個比較典型的 家長介紹的段落

回答: Brag sheet 首先家長應想一想不常冒泡2025-12-15 08:06:28

XXX has two missions in life, help others and achieve justice. XXX led the animal rescue and rehabilitation action organization for the whole past five years encompassing her high school career. Our home got constant various surprising guests such as the likes of frog, raccoons,falcons or even snakes. She once stood her ground and won't back off facing a guy who was suspect of animal abuse, until he let go of a dog being housed in the yard in sub zero temperatures. XXX is usually shy and soft spoken. But good luck intimidating her when a defenseless little animal, or children is in need of rescue. For her work in animal welfare, she was awarded Good Citizen Prize from Humane Society of America.


XXX's dream is to be a veterinary doctor. She is curious and an independent thinker. Once her history project let her to have discovered a rail transportation route of cattle export. She initiated a separate project. She interviewed handlers, walked the remnant of the old route, researched archives. From her findings, she submitted a scholarly paper with her teacher, to a peer reviewed journal to be published.

最後,列出 “achievements”。 不是幹巴巴,盡量有血有肉,不要搞成achievement機器。

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這個寫的很好了。 -不常冒泡- 給 不常冒泡 發送悄悄話 (0 bytes) () 12/15/2025 postreply 08:53:02

是不才替她寫的。 -無言無語無聲- 給 無言無語無聲 發送悄悄話 (0 bytes) () 12/15/2025 postreply 12:00:56

你寫的?英文很好。 -不常冒泡- 給 不常冒泡 發送悄悄話 (0 bytes) () 12/15/2025 postreply 12:16:56

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