types of college essays，這第一個是典型的小中男形象？

https://www.reddit.com/r/ApplyingToCollege/comments/18senb8/types_of_college_essays/

the resume: I was 14 years old, I had the incredible opportunity to participate in the AMC competition. This was a very incredible experience because I scored a perfect score and qualified for the AIME, then took the USAMO a few months later. Deeply inspired by my prowess at math, I decided to found a non-profit dedicated to teaching math to students, a completely original idea. After I did this, my whole life was different and I got a research internship at MIT, where I used math to solve the GZK Paradox. That summer, I also decided to take the SAT. After studying incredibly hard, I managed to achieve a perfect 1600, one of my greatest accomplishments to date.

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• incredible 出現了好幾次就這一小段 -2008VGirl- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/15/2024 postreply 09:18:16

• 重數學輕閱讀寫作，呆呆同類的 -數與形- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/15/2024 postreply 09:21:45

• 哈哈 -rr6mumu- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/15/2024 postreply 11:45:00

• 聽起來像大昊哈哈哈 -成功的77- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/15/2024 postreply 09:21:54

• 大吳家的進了H吧，這個essay水平也能進H？ -數與形- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/15/2024 postreply 09:24:12

• 這個essay就是來黑化亞裔的吧？和大昊貼的異曲同工哈哈 -成功的77- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/15/2024 postreply 09:26:03

• 都是誇張搞笑的，下麵有幾個明顯是黑人的LOL。但咱能讀出差別來，說明筆者捕捉到了特點 -數與形- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/15/2024 postreply 09:29:25

• 肯定是搞笑的。這個英文水平不可能拿到SAT1600吧。 -gyarados- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/15/2024 postreply 09:31:52

• 編的，小學畢業水平。 -其樂無窮- ♂ (0 bytes) () 01/15/2024 postreply 09:34:22

• 當然是編的。讀書多點的孩子二三年級就能寫出這樣的水平，爛學區的孩子高中畢業都不一定能寫出來 -數與形- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/15/2024 postreply 09:38:43