娃小說寫到2萬3千多字了

Stretching my arm as high as I could and swinging for the branch hanging barely out of my reach: miss. Again: barely missed. A third time: finally grabbed on. My feet dangled as my arms hung onto the branch, struggling to pull myself up. Behind me, the roars of wolves, the screams of cattle, the cries of the bull, all of those factors motivated me to keep moving, to keep moving for my life. Finally, I managed to pull myself onto the branch, carefully balancing myself to stand on it and climbing further upwards until my vantage point spanned across the clearing and more; just below the thick canopy that concealed the horrors below. Just in the range of my eyesight was the bull, dueling against a horde of wolves, them pouncing and jumping at it at every which angle. This bull was completely jet black with solid gray horns and specks of white dots in its coat. It looked like a Grim Reaper, however in contrast, this time it wasn’t the one being sent to the underworld. Shards of ruby materialized on the bull’s glossy coat, a contrast of day and night against a clean slate.

As the king fell, the citizens were sure to follow, the kingdom fell as the invading forces feasted on the spoils.

 

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• 是啊，她的確說要寫的，最近兩次是問上大學需要帶全新的衣服還有家具啥的？ -兩女寶媽- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/08/2023 postreply 07:43:20

• 厲害，咋有那麽多話會寫啊 -zaocha2002- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/08/2023 postreply 07:48:38

• 不知道啊，這還沒到高潮呢，因為預計要寫200頁，現在才寫到40頁 -兩女寶媽- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/08/2023 postreply 07:51:47

• 牛！ -籬笆08- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/08/2023 postreply 07:54:20

• 小學生這個程度很厲害啊 -jingzhumama- ♀ (72 bytes) () 06/08/2023 postreply 07:59:03

• 老二？你家老二4年級吧？我家的馬上就初中了 -兩女寶媽- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/08/2023 postreply 08:03:28

• 哈哈。她家老二是狗娃。和我家老三是 -圓西瓜- ♀ (30 bytes) () 06/08/2023 postreply 08:17:14

• 原來是這樣啊，我一直以為她家有個弟弟 -兩女寶媽- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/08/2023 postreply 08:20:53

• 厲害！ -bobpainting- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/08/2023 postreply 08:05:03

• 厲害！大藤娃 -嘉荷- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/08/2023 postreply 08:08:21

• 借你吉言：） -兩女寶媽- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/08/2023 postreply 08:25:05

• 寫得生動。準備初中時投稿啦。老二班上好幾個娃這次全國比賽得獎了 -圓西瓜- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/08/2023 postreply 08:16:05

• 不知道初中幾時能完工，寫小說還是非常耗時的 -兩女寶媽- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/08/2023 postreply 08:21:58

• 參加比賽的一般都是 -圓西瓜- ♀ (36 bytes) () 06/08/2023 postreply 08:26:44

• 對的。13歲+可以參加，到時候估計會試試 -兩女寶媽- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/08/2023 postreply 08:27:49

• 這就叫天賦。 -小鬆鬆- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/08/2023 postreply 08:43:18

• 天才小作家。非常impressive。 -Porcelana- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/08/2023 postreply 09:46:56

• 寫作有天賦！很生動！用詞嫻熟！有功底！ -加州陽光123- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/08/2023 postreply 10:57:52

• 太能寫了！ -Shanghaigirl98- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/08/2023 postreply 11:43:17

• 小娃厲害啊！必須讚一個！ -Croissant_22- ♀ (0 bytes) () 06/08/2023 postreply 12:59:14