開句“翠幕連天,綠茵遮地,鋪成夏日奢華”,避開俗套;上片即時寫景,喜“雲淡風清,今宵月色尤佳”;下片因時懷古,喜“霓裳舞罷,鳳釵失落誰家”,全篇扣一“夏”字,雜淡淡喜悅與惆悵之感,收結於“晚風吹動,一片蒹葭”,餘韻未盡也~~~~~~
哈哈,做一回王婆,或宿酒未醒乎?
多謝鈴蘭臨賞誇讚!
開句“翠幕連天,綠茵遮地,鋪成夏日奢華”,避開俗套;上片即時寫景,喜“雲淡風清,今宵月色尤佳”;下片因時懷古,喜“霓裳舞罷,鳳釵失落誰家”,全篇扣一“夏”字,雜淡淡喜悅與惆悵之感,收結於“晚風吹動,一片蒹葭”,餘韻未盡也~~~~~~
哈哈,做一回王婆,或宿酒未醒乎?
多謝鈴蘭臨賞誇讚!
• 這賣瓜的老王, 油菜, 可愛. -鈴蘭聽風- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/23/2024 postreply 18:48:13
• 嗬嗬,所幸尚未油膩也~~~~~~:) -山水蒼茫- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/24/2024 postreply 07:03:36
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