前兩首童心,《因我》透著男孩子青澀的霸氣。《釣月亮》多了狡猾,或許疲倦了,想守株待兔,不想,人生就沒辦法不勞而獲:)
《烏鴉》寫得很靈動,機敏的烏鴉冷靜又如脫兔,場景感很強,大讚!
前兩首童心,《因我》透著男孩子青澀的霸氣。《釣月亮》多了狡猾,或許疲倦了,想守株待兔,不想,人生就沒辦法不勞而獲:)
《烏鴉》寫得很靈動,機敏的烏鴉冷靜又如脫兔,場景感很強,大讚!
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不同風格。謝謝雪蓮讀的仔細。
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