沒感覺平仄有問題。這詩寫的有一種縱橫兩萬裏,上下五千年的磅礴氣勢。讚!
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• 謝為版:)剛在中醫那裏紮針,想起一詞沒對仗,又改了改。這種詩太難了。。。 -snowandlotus- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/08/2022 postreply 10:32:49
• 謝為版:)剛在中醫那裏紮針,想起一詞沒對仗,又改了改。這種詩太難了。。。 -snowandlotus- ♀ (0 bytes) () 01/08/2022 postreply 10:32:49
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