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Milestone

Awakened by a nightmare before midnight,
I got off the bed,
and walked towards the bathroom for a fresh breath.
My fitbit lighted up fireworks,
when I opened the door to the bathroom.
It celebrated my ten thousand steps today,
and marked my first step towards toilet.
 

xx- You have writing chops.

Lovely

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