貼一個歌詞樣的 between your wrinkles 和尿盆裏的倒影

Between your wrinkles

When I heard cloud’s cries,
spring breeze blurred my eyes.
I saw wrinkles on your face,
in the willow-stroked lake.
Your eyes shone like starry skies,
your smile woke me like sunrise. 
But I was foolish to chase,
and catch a fleeting snowflake.

When I hear my heart’s cries,
time breeze blurs my eyes.
I see wrinkles on your face,
years after my heartbreak.
I think I have grown wise,
can see true love through disguise.
But love leaves me without trace,
every morning after I awake.

Oh my love,
wandered between your wrinkles then.
Oh my love,
wanders between your wrinkles now.

所有跟帖： 

• 謝謝顫音兄。尿盆的確值得深思。 -立- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/17/2020 postreply 14:36:52

• 我真應該在家擺一個尿盆，再貼上顫音兄的詩。我也應該寫一個。過去我是否定杜尚的。近來觀點完全變了。 -立- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/17/2020 postreply 14:38:03

• 唉，中文真的有局限。如果你我兄弟是英文的母語，現在也混成詩人了。可現在隻有反動派嘲笑詩人是，立才是詩人。領月餅是沒人承認立是詩人 -立- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/17/2020 postreply 14:39:49

• 美～ -花菜- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/17/2020 postreply 15:51:05

• 雖然不喜歡讀英文，不過這貼的英文比中文美~~~ -雪晶- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/17/2020 postreply 18:20:37

• 押韻壓得好穩準，像來自一個世紀前的sentimento -何仙姑- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/17/2020 postreply 18:22:13

• 真美啊！ -.川曄- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/17/2020 postreply 22:24:18

• 理科生柔情起來真了不得 :） 詩很美。 -簡丹兒- ♀ (0 bytes) () 12/18/2020 postreply 03:51:53