"一個人隻擁有此生此世是不夠的,他還應該擁有詩意的世界" 立意不錯,但文法不通。

來源: ZoyaWashington 2013-09-27 09:34:06 [] [舊帖] [給我悄悄話] 本文已被閱讀: 次 (441 bytes)
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此生此世 and 詩意的世界 are 2 different concepts, it doesn't make sense to compare the them together. Everyone has a life time, whether it turns into a dream world or a barren land, it is up to each individual to decide. Clearly a poetic world is more desirable than harsh desert.

Maybe he has forgotten how to write in Chinese properly, like me.
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