。。你的詩,太做作,修飾的痕跡太濃。像初少年中生的作品。。。不過你做海菜真上心。。
不知所雲。。你得承認,撇開內容不說,俺這小詩比你整的那些酸不拉及玩意強太多了
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• 俺一般見到日本網名在中文網搗蛋隻想逮住狠揍一頓 -by心言- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/30/2012 postreply 08:51:10
• 理解,譬如村上,江上,太郎,武郎等 :-))) -金筆- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/30/2012 postreply 09:40:12
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