"我踩在上麵不能移動," 改為"我踩在上麵不能動彈,"本會不會更入骨?
心姐,真想和你為鄰.
除讀詩評畫.....,你家鍋碗瓢盆一響,我就來幫幫心裏著急的你. :)
"我踩在上麵不能移動," 改為"我踩在上麵不能動彈,"本會不會更入骨?
心姐,真想和你為鄰.
除讀詩評畫.....,你家鍋碗瓢盆一響,我就來幫幫心裏著急的你. :)
• 改的好。我這裏等著接孩子著急忘了狼那段什麽暈了,臨時瞎寫。你要是我鄰居,姐真是幸福了:)) -bymyheart- ♀ (0 bytes) () 10/16/2012 postreply 13:37:21
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