"帶走我最美好的年華",本來寫的是"走過我最美好的年華",但是發現"走過"兩字重複了。憂憂認為"帶走"還是"走過"?
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"帶走我最美好的年華",本來寫的是"走過我最美好的年華",但是發現"走過"兩字重複了。憂憂認為"帶走"還是"走過"?
Thanks!
• 帶走好。其實你原詩很好,不用改,我就是貧個嘴兒。。。LOL -塵凡無憂- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/26/2022 postreply 06:45:19
• 這樣吧,年華不走好不好。。還押點韻。“把我最好的年華留在我的淚目裏。” -kirn- ♀ (0 bytes) () 05/26/2022 postreply 06:58:29
• 小k,鄰兄不要淚目,這麽美好的事,隻有幸福 -nearby- ♂ (0 bytes) () 05/26/2022 postreply 12:22:12
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