其實呢，是挺好實現的：）秘訣是不能用“講故事”的方法寫書，而是用“拍電影”的角度來寫。因為講故事以“敘述”為主，他今天

幹了啥，她又幹了啥。而電影，肯定是要大量的對話，甚至包括打鬥戲。

舉個例子，黑客帝國裏史密斯每次同男主重點打戲，開頭都會有非常精彩的對話。如果沒了對話，就剩下後麵的打鬥，這部電影的藝術成就至少要削去一半。

“Why, Mr. Anderson?, Why, why?.
Why do you do it? Why, why get up?.
Why keep fighting?.
Do you believe you're fighting...for something?.
For more than your survival?.
Can you tell me what it is?.
Do you even know?; Is it freedom?, Or truth?.
Perhaps peace?. Could it be for love?

Illusions, Mr. Anderson.
Vagaries of perception.

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